WALT Once upon a time there was a village named
Paparore. and there were 8 handsome boys ^ the
^ The
Dad was jeff. [not 8th] When the boys went
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fishing there ears got caught by the sound of
Their
beautiful sing on the top of mount carmel. the 7
Singing M Camel T
boys walked back to the paparore village with
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their new wifes and they did not take care of
wives
Their huger or there salf because there new
t Hunger themselves Their
wifes wood only eat seafood for their lunch. the
Wives would
7 boys got skine ^ their wifes got mad and they
skinny wives
broak up ^ the 7 brothers. when to there 8th
broke ^ S. W
Brother the 8th seed look at yourself you are
just skin and bone the 8th brother name was
Jace. Jace when to see what they were planning
the 8th one sped back the the paparore village
the 8th brother toledo the 7 brothers the plan
that there old wifes were going to do to them
They were going to starve to death so all the
Boys tolled jeff that the old wires were going to
do to the 7 boys so jeff went up mount camil and
caught them then he turned into a chicken and
flew to mitai and then mitai flew to the heves to
The gods matariki stars
By Mason.T
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