Matariki stars

WALT Once upon a time there was a village named 

Paparore. and there were 8 handsome boys ^ the 

                                                                   ^ The

Dad was jeff. [not 8th] When the boys went 

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fishing there ears got caught by the sound of 

             Their

beautiful sing on the top of mount carmel. the 7 

                Singing                    M          Camel T

boys walked back to the paparore village with 

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their new wifes and they did not take care of 

                   wives

Their huger or there salf because there new                                                                                

 t       Hunger   themselves              Their

wifes wood only eat seafood for their lunch. the 

 Wives  would

7 boys got skine ^ their wifes got mad and they 

                   skinny           wives

broak up ^ the 7 brothers. when to there 8th 

broke       ^                        S.  W

Brother the 8th seed look at yourself you are 

just skin and bone the 8th brother name was 

Jace. Jace when to see what they were planning 

the 8th one sped back the the paparore village 

the 8th brother toledo the 7 brothers the plan 

that there old wifes were going to do to them 

They were going to starve to death so all the 

Boys tolled jeff that the old wires were going to 

do to the 7 boys so jeff went up mount camil and 

caught them then he turned into a chicken and 

flew to mitai and then mitai flew to the heves to 

The gods matariki stars 

By Mason.T

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