My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Thursday, August 13, 2020
Wednesday, August 12, 2020
My Speech
WALT: we are learning to write a persuasive speech
Topic- Do pets get the same care as humans?
Kia ora my name is Mason, my speech is about dogs.
So I have a dog named Syd, I feel like he gets the same care as me, a human.
But some humans don’t get good care and some pets can stand up for themselves. My dog can, he’s speedy, he’s strong and I say he is great at everything that dogs can do! He is the best dog in the world. So dogs can smell to 20km away is that far? I will say it’s so far and did you know why dogs sniff people private because to see if it is it’s owner or not. And dogs or any pet you have they need a place to sleep a house and food and water so would you like to be stuck in a cage for your life know neither would I so stop and thick what you are doing to the poor pets. thank-you for listening to my speech
My reflection is when it was so hard to write it all because whenever I used all my ideas I had no more left in my head so I had to wait for more ideas to pop up in my head.
What did you like about my speech?