The lion king - First Draft

Yesterday we went to the movies with te tinana we watched the lion king we had poping  popcorn and a fizzy drink same other people had water. Then we went into the theatre their were same adds  in the theatre then the movie cam on I was eating my popcorn and drinking my drink. then started The movie was nearly finish when it was finish 
(my favourite) part when Pumbaa the warthog and Timon found Simba laying on the sand. When Simba got big he wet back home to save his family Scar told simba that he killed mufasa then simba killed scar. 

  

Wonderful Sentences

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.

We know that wonderful sentences need:

• detail (elaboration)
• capital letters and full stops
• Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
• quality vocab - WOW words

WALT recognise different parts of speech

• Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi
• Adjectives describe nouns. Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
• Verbs are doing words. Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
• Adverbs describe verbs. Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.

EXAMPLES

1. The bird is angry

2.The bluey-blackish bird is very angry.

3.The blue and black bird is angry because same boys were throwing rocks and one of the rocks hit the bird and that is why the bird got angry.

1. The cat is sad. 
2. The black cat is sad because she has no home to sleep in.